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Eternal Twilight part 3 by juanrock Eternal Twilight part 3 by juanrock
after a long creator's block here is part three of eternal twilight, hope everyone likes it!

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next: coming soon
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:icondungeonbrony:
DungeonBrony Featured By Owner Edited Mar 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think I need a hug now!
What's going to happen?

(no pressure though man, stay cool)
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Metis12375 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  New member Student Artist
This is really interesting so far, PLEEASE update it! I don't mean to pressure you too much but... Please. It's too awesome.
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:iconthasbrony:
thasbrony Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
please update ;(
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:iconcaleoisawesome:
CaleoIsAwesome Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Student General Artist
This is really great!!! I hope you can update soon, but I'm not going to rush it
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ScarletNightMoon Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014
cmon please hurry its really good
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:iconpixelpop84:
PixelPop84 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
When is next part
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:icondiablo2000:
Diablo2000 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
You ever going tp up[date this comic or is it dead? Sorry just like to know.
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:iconsky-zoned:
Sky-Zoned Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Wow, a comic series where Twilight is the enemy >:) Can't wait to see how this plays out :3
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:iconrnko26:
rnko26 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
shes not an enemy shes just gone bonkers
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:icondarkguys:
darkguys Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
Its kinda true though. I would react just like Twilight too.  Immortality, a terrible thing to have depending on the ones who receive it.

I like where this is going and i would wrote you a note but since its only at page 3, i will say it here.

Its a good story and your drawing is good. 
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Writer
Will you continue this story sometime in the future? In my fallible opinion, Dark Twilight stories are better when Twilight grows corrupt not despite friendship, but because of it. It'll be interesting to see where else you take the plot~
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:iconjuanrock:
juanrock Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with you, problem is that im in the worst artistic hole of my life, last couple of months i've drawn next to nothing
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
Oh man, that's gotta suck. Sorry to hear that. >_<" Anything I can do to help you through this time?
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:iconjuanrock:
juanrock Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, showing interest is actually a pretty good way to help me, here I'm hoping that I'm back to drawing soon enough.
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Writer
In that case, I'll read and look at more of your stuff! 
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:iconjulka03:
julka03 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
When is the next part??
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:iconbruiser128:
bruiser128 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
If I was in the same position as Twilight I'd be looking for a way to do the opposite.
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Dulcesdecolores8 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
when its the next part??
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:icondeadlockat:
DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
By anychance that your going to continue this? Ive been waiting for months also. Not like Im rushing or anything.
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:iconjuanrock:
juanrock Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I actually have the next page sketched already but havent start work on it. To be honest I'm a bit out of steam to work on this, but I should keep working on it.
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Drakenhof Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I hope you continue soon. The plot is very interesting!
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:icondeadlockat:
DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Ok Im not rushing anybody or forcing to work on it, Its just because I love the story in how it goes and the comic has some intense curiosity giver.
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:iconjuanrock:
juanrock Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't worry, I get it. It's just that since you enjoy my work you deserve to know where I stand on it, lots of times it has been me wondering if X thing will be finished by their authors, hope I can deliver!
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:icondeadlockat:
DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Yeah, you can put it that way.
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:iconlolodancer:
Lolodancer Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Filmographer
MORE!!
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:iconlost-our-dreams:
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
bufds MOAR MOAR
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Nikol1617 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmangainlove:
maNgainlove Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Omg its so awesome!
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:iconshadowpegasus30:
Shadowpegasus30 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
this kinda reminds me of the fanfic "Twilight's Dollhouse"
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:iconthe-wizard-of-art:
The-Wizard-of-Art Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:iconponyangelplz: My friends. Will live.
:icontwilightseesplz: FOREVER!!!


Looks like a perfect setup for some serious shenaniganizations. I'm interested to see how it plays out.
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SHADOWtheHEJHOG Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
Woah this is an interesting story. Can't wait to see how it ends.
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:icondalekcaos:
Dalekcaos Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
immortality is the worst punishment...
it make you lose everything you love and everything who bring you happiness once...
it never stop...
no matter what do you do...
death is what you always wish...
and even of all your attempts, you never get it...
you see how all your friends and lovers die in front of your eyes...
and you can do nothing to stop it...
thats the punishment of be inmortal...
whats a life without someone to spend it with?
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EspyLacopa Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Immortality is only a curse if you let it be.

Yes, you'll always lose people.  But you'll always have the ability to find new people.

Even us mortals have to deal with loss, and we manage it.
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:icondalekcaos:
Dalekcaos Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
Yes, it's easy to tell, but now imagine you, inmortal, 100000 years in the future, maybe there's some live yet, but all have an end, and i'll be the end of the live, except for you, cursed to walk in The emptiness, for all eternity, alone in the dark soul of the space, traveling, meeting and crying, even the eternal one gets tired of his existence, and starts envy of mortal for the benefit of die
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Goldeathorus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Immortality's benefits are also extremely understated, though; not just its defects.

Infinite life also means infinite power:
If you cannot die, your body would no longer have limits. For example, no death via aging means that you would never stop growing. Not stopping growth would mean that you could essentially evolve (Even if you don't believe in evolution, infinite physical improvement would basically be the same thing, but faster, so it's irrelevant) without breeding, leading to the capability of doing absolutely anything that's possible. Because of the fact that the one in question is already immortal, obviously granting others immortality would have to be possible in this scenario; meaning that being immortal would have to come with the (at least eventual) ability to grant immortality to others.

Even if there was no infinite growth, there would be infinite knowledge, understanding and skill. These three combined, (once again, due to being immortal yourself, the possibility is undeniable) would also give you another opportunity to grant others the same immortality.

I could go on for hours, but I think I've made my point; if you're immortal, and you don't want something to happen, you can bloody well stop it from happening.
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Dalekcaos Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
immortals doesn't have infinite power, they are like mortals, only that they can't die, and they don't make other people immortal, even if they have children they only going to be half inmortal, that doesn't guarantees that they will last forever, maybe in they long life they get a lot of know, but at the end they get tired of living, imagine life when there is no planets or stars, the only way that an inmortal life happy is with another inmortal, knowing that theirs children would believe in "free love" or incest, if there no another inmortals round there, well that happends a log time ago, read the life of gengis khan, thanks to him we don't really know who are family and who are strange, but moving to the principal theme, if someone, (i believe in evolution by the way) offer to me inmortality i would say no, and you?
remember that

"With Great Power Comes Great Responsability"

wise words of the old uncle Ben
if you missed don't worry they say the line
again and again and again XD

Ode to a superhero
-Weird Al Yankovid
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:icongoldeathorus:
Goldeathorus Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
Did you not read a word of my explanation? If any one thing can be made infinite, it means that whoever has it can make absolutely anything else infinite.

If mortals did live infinitely and without the restrictions that come with aging, they could eventually do ABSOLUTELY ANYTHING.

They aren't limited in their time, so they could easily find a way to give their immortality to others within their lifespan.
If humanity died before that happened, they could devote their unlimited time to finding a way to reverse time (or re-create humanity itself), and thus it wouldn't matter if humanity died before they figured it out.
Because of the fact that matter and energy can neither be created nor destroyed, you can't even make the argument that the materials would eventually be gone, as it's physically impossible for that to happen.

There simply isn't a chance for it to not be entirely beneficial. It's not like dying yourself will prevent others' deaths; heck, it could only extend them.
You'd have to be stupidly pessimistic not to realize that if you had an infinite amount of time to think about it.
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:icondalekcaos:
Dalekcaos Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
first: i read the whole thing you wrote before
Second: i was thinking my text me while i was writing it
Third: it's like a poem, no sense and no matter because they are words that make think a person
and finally
fourth: i thought you was extending my "poem" if i can called in that way because i don't it was a good one and i don't make that all the time, only when i'm really bored, i know about physic, and i know that inmortality is almost imposible, if we don't pay attention to the jellyfish, they are really immortals while others animals don't kill they, and that of the "energy can neither be created or destroyed" it was wrong, just think about the antimatter, they broke the isaac newton conservation of energy law and the labosier conservation of matter law too, no one of the scientists observed the antimatter in the space, but the theory is too solid to ignore it for complete, so, think before tipe as linux tell to the user when he/she use "sudo" for first time, and, if you don't end of read my before reply, at he end, i wrote a irrelevant and funny thing, you have t listen to that song, it's called: ode to a superhero, it's about spiderman
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DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Love the look on her eyes.
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:iconmousefeather:
Mousefeather Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Take your time, good sir! Nopony likes a rushed page!
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EcnarancE Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Dammit! I have to wait for the next installment! I need to know how it ends!
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kacript Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
Love it, I've waited so long to see a fancomic tackle the scenario of Twilight's immortality and the drama the goes with it. Can't wait to see the rest of it.
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DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
*Dr. X*: .......... Twilight......... What have you done?

*Raven*: ......... Aaand your worst fears came true, Doc: She's working on the secrets of immortality.
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beast5power Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
I hate alicorn twilight because of how the show absolutely didn't gave a fuck about those problems.
About how she wasn't supposed to want her ugly wings as if there was no problem at all.

For me , alicorn twilight is the dead twilight that died when she exploded. 

.Unicorn twilight forever. The only one. Stay the way you are , life doesn't have cheat codes.
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juanrock Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There are so many reasons I dislike the way that was handled. For starters it sends an aweful message to kids, the whole do this and you can be a princess? are you kidding me? just no! I have a niece and I don't want people setting her up for a disappointment like that, life is harsh enough!

Second of all the way they completely skipped over the implications, which are huge! I mean, she is a princess now, why would you keep her as a library clerk! She is immortal, then why is she not freaking out! eternity is a whole lot to deal with, and if according to twitter she isn't immortal then why the hell does she get to be a princess?! it makes sense with Luna and Celestia because they clearly are immortal, so they are the wisest beings in the land, but if twilight is not then she is receiving her crown just because she is an alicorn. I mean its a racial thing, alicorn supremacy. That is just too much aweful.
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Goldeathorus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Firstly, it's not exactly setting the bar low for what she needed to become a princess. She did, after all need to master the arcane arts under the tutelage of a bloody deity, save the entire world three times, AND get through some of the most dangerous and chaotic "friendship problems" ever to exist completely unscathed. Even the last of those is pretty damn impressive considering that she started off having no experience in socializing with any sentient creature that wasn't her relative or teacher. (Well, aside from Spike, but he's more like a son/younger brother to her than a normal friend) If any human did all of that, I'd be amazed if they WEREN'T thought of as highly as royalty.

As for the second part, according to Twitter, she wouldn't "outlive her friends". That doesn't have to mean that she's mortal; it only means exactly what it says. It could just as easily mean that her friends too will become immortal, or that she's going to turn mortal again at some point.
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juanrock Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can be as acomplished as a human can posibly be, and that still won't make you royalty, that's not how it works. And sure, Twilight has done many impresive feats, but so have any of the mane six, aguably many of them have advanced more that she did, and they are not growing apendeges and recieving crowns about it. 

And my argument isn't that the character doesnt deserve the position, it's against the way the coronation was handled, which in my opinion, was aweful.
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Goldeathorus Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
None of the others were trained by existing royalty for most of their life. There certainly have been times throughout history that when no heirs to the throne remain, one who currently has the throne will train someone for it; is it really so difficult to believe that much at least?
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lonercs Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
we still only have 1/3 of the story
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kacript Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
So essentially Twilight is becoming the next version of Nightmare Moon. Just like Luna she's not innately evil or bad but was driven by a build of up of negative emotions. While Luna was driven by a sense of feeling neglected Twilight is being driven by fear. Can't wait to see the rest of it.
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